First read (September 30th 2012)Edit
Online, 7857 characters, putting it at 4.1 'standard' pages.
Read on a Sam Hughes reading spree on September 30th 2012, after discovering I don't know, Timmy, being God is a big responsibility.
Not as good as I don't know, Timmy, but semi-interesting. Needed to be developed more to really interest me.
First read (October 21st 2013)Edit
Non-Player Character was posted to r/scifi and someone mentioned this as similar. I read it, realising it was Sam Hughes but without remembering if I'd read it before. I thought it was lacking something, which it appears I thought before too.